"I like your idea to use both hands and to move objects in front of them after each round, points should get deducted if the player falls over an object." Commented on http://rperricelli-gdd110.blogspot.com/2014/02/wk3-deliverable.html?showComment=1392758454614#c8189662412272749799
"I would change up top where it still says the author of the page is Ira Fay. Also maybe add a new element to the game to make it your own personalized game variant of CTF." Commented on http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com/2014/02/blog-post_8390.html?showComment=1392758954245#c6339033161401326721
"I like how you play a game within an MMO's online community, Runescape is a bit big though to be able to hide anywhere on the map. Maybe playing within the wilderness would make it more likely for the seekers to find you and make a more intense experience since you can die very easily (or what I remember of it)." Commented on http://bheisenberg-gdd110.blogspot.com/2014/02/blog-post_11.html#comment-form
Others' Comments:
Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:31 PM
The black and white theme does provide for good contrast but a little color probably wouldn't hurt. It looks like a lot of large paragraphs of plain text that might turn away a reader. It is very sequential as well; your eyes see the picture quickly but for the most part it just moves straight down the page. Maybe not have every sub heading centered in the page.
JAromandoFebruary 24, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Space it out a little more and it will appear more clean.
Brian EisenbergFebruary 24, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Clean looking design but the monochromeness is a bit rough on the eyes. The header font could also be improved to look more engaging. Generally good design.
